2012-03-22

Octo The Brave Octopus

Yaya
third grader
first winner English Story Telling St. Joseph Jubilium

Good Morning Judges.  My name is Yaya. In this story I will be Ariel the narator.

I am Ariel the Goddess. I will tell you a story under the sea. The title is  Octo, the brave Octopus.

One day, after school time...  young animals under the sea wanted to play. Toto the turtle, and Nemo the fish loved to play hide and seek.
“Hey, let’s play hide and seek!” said Toto to Nemo. “Yea...yea.. yea... i'd love to.. i'd love to... “. While they were playing together, a scary thing came closer. “Hello, I am Octo the octopus! I want to be your friend!” But Toto and Nemo were frightened “HA.....!!! Leave us alone.. leave us alone... go away... ” and ran away.”what is that?! What a scary creature!! I don’t wanna have a friend like that!!”  Said Nemo to Toto...  “yea.. and...and....  did you see the legs?? Are those legs or what... hoo...no.. no.. no.. i don’t wanna have a friend like him...” said Toto..
“Don’t be afraid.. I won’t eat you...” said the Octo the octopus sad.. “I just wanna be your friend.” Octo leave them tearfully, sit  and watched them behind the rocks.
Unexpectedly, Toto and Nemo met a fierce and scary shark. “Haw......”  “HA......!!!!! Come on Toto.. swim!!... faster.. follow me... Don’t let the shark eat you....!!! ” The shark chased after them.
Octa saw the shark and tried to help them... “don’t be afraid my little friends... i will help you!!!” Thank God, Octo faced the shark without fear! He shout his ink “hmmmm.....!!! DONT YOU EVER EVER EVER TRY TO EAT MY FRIENDS!!!” and the water became dark. Finally, the shark went away “Uhuk..uhuk.. uhuk... you are save today... hmm.... ”
Toto and Nemo were very thankfull to Octo the brave octopus and Octo became their new brave friend.
From this story we learn, never judge the book from the cover. Thank you.